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Friday, March 31, 2017

Tom Trueheart writing.

This week room 10 has been working on a story about and Girl or a Boy called Tom Trueheart. Tom Trueheart is the size of a thumb here is mine story hope you like it . P.S there might be some mistakes but if there leave a comment down below.   

Tom Trueheart

I am getting ready for my big adventure to save my 6 brothers and there Princess Brides as they went missing last night. I am packing all my weapons, food for the adventure and warm clothes. I’m not a normal Girl because I am the size of a thumb. I walk into the soft sparkly snow I was feeling so brave but never to. I kept on walking down the dark and bushy track trying so hard to find my brothers and their beautiful Princess Brides. Then a humongous wolf come out of nowhere I ran as fast as I could but it was not enough so I hid. The wolf could not find me so I kept on walking.  


After I had took like 20 steps away from the leaf that I was hiding under I saw my 6 brothers and their beautiful Princess Brides in the castle but when I looked more close lee, there was lots of guards with dogs there was no way I could get thrown them if I was a big so it is Amazing thing I am small. I keep on walking to the castle and just walked past the dogs and the guards they did not see me. When I got to the castle I sown my brothers on other side of the door when I looked in the keyhole. “You can fit in the keyhole “ said Kade one of my brothers so I walked through the keyhole and jump down it was not a good idea to jump down because I could not get the key that was on the shelf. “There is no why I can get the Key you will be skane in there forever.” After I had just about to walk out the door my brother said “ no you can do it I will fit my head out of the change and you can unlock the door.” So he graded the key and handed it to me. I jump back on the lock and then unlocked it and then I we all ran out and lived happy ever after.
THE END!!!!                    




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