This week we have been writing a story. Here is mine hope you like it.
One normal but not normal afternoon I was looking for answers in an abandoned city. I was in a building it was called Haven Nanosystem. I was pushing a big steel box off the 58th floor because I could not get it open. BANG! it hit the ground, it was the only way I could get into it. The person that hidden it did not want anyone to find what was in the box.
It opened, there was a little glass thing. It turned on but all I could see was my face and words but I could not read what it said. Then I heard a sound I did not know what it was then a big ship appeared. I ran as fast as I could and slipped down the wall and jumped on my motorbike and zoomed off.
I rode my motorbike as fast as I could but it catch up to me I could not get away. I did not stop what ever was in the ship did not want me to find out everything. I was heading to the tunnels it shorted out these bugs out of their ship they ran after me not stopping at all.
I picked up my bombs and changed it at the bugs but it missed “The bugs are too fast” I picked up another bomb and charged at the bugs it missed again. I looked at the sign “Yes I am nearly downtown”. I went into the tunnel and the bugs shot at me. I grabbed the last bomb and placed it on the roof. BANG it got the bugs. I looked behind thinking that the big ship was gone but it was in front of me I did not stop. Then it started to shout at me but nobody could get me. I rode my motorbike as fast as I could off into the distance.
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