W.A.L.T recall events through the eyes of an animal.
Success Criteria
I know I will be successful when my recount has a
- Title
- Orientation: When? Who? Where? Why?
- Sequence of events: What happened? Describe using the senses (hear, taste, see, smell and feel).
- Personal Comment: How did the events make you feel?
(First Draft)
The worst day of my life.
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One nice morning i was working along the river bank ayy, can smell the fresh morning air. Suddenly the herd stopped then I could see that there was some lions in the distance. They were getting ready to pounce on us. There was nothing to do but to run. Bam I fell into the river bank. I started to sink then I got pulled out of the water but there was something sharp pulling my tail. Then I saw my dad, mum and my friends they were running to me and the lions. I could taste blood in my mouth. I can hear the ground shaking.
Finally i got back to my herd, my dad got really angry and started to ram the pack of lonis. I was so scared i just had hid at the back of the herd, but at least I made it i fell releft.
