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Friday, July 7, 2017

AIDAN GIBBONS

In week 3 this term we did a story about AIDANGIBBONS it is really cool.




AIDAN GIBBONS

I’m brooding to ship Nervously, looking at all the other soldiers.
I did not know what to do, because there was no room on the ship so I had a sleep.

2 months later.  

The ship stopped the door opened and we all ran there was no going back. I was so nervous but also frustrated. Why did they have to send us here I hate being in wars. It is hard enough at home when I am fighting with my wife I can’t imagine what is going to be like here.

4 hours later.

We were still fighting and all of us were nearly gone. I did not know what to do, then a big bomb came and hit lots of people I could not see anything it was so dark. All the smoke went away I saw everyone they were lying on the ground I thought I was the only one alive. I did not fight at all I was to weak so I lay there. The other side was thinking that we were all dead but we were not. After They had left the people that were alive got back on the ship.

2 months later.

The door opened and our family were waiting. It was the best day ever. I thought that I was never going to see my wife and kids again.

2 comments:

  1. You are good at it keep it up.

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    1. That is really is nice Thanks.

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