Adventures are the pits!

For the first week back to school, we have been writing about a boy/girl that has gone into a big tunes of ball's, and is trying to get out. We had to watch a video about the story and then stared writing about. Here is the link for the video Adventures are the pits! . Here is my story hope you like it.

My hands are sweaty my face is as red as a tomato. I was anxious to go down the slide.  I took a big breath in and pushed myself down. I screamed the whole way down until I face planted into ball’s.

I open my eyes and looked up there was a humongous big tower of ball’s.

I thought I was going to be stuck down there forever. Then I heard my Mom asking all the kids where I were. So I grabbed the wall and off I went not stopping. Then my foot slipped I thought it was the end of me but I garb back on and keep on climbing. Then I saw a little pink plaster it fell on my face I tried to get it off. I let go of the balls and almost fell but then, I grabbed on to something it was a stick it helped me.

I took it out of the wall and stabbed it back in. I pulled myself up and kept on going, it was an adventure seeing all the beautiful colours. I looked down and took a deep breath. Then I heard my Mom she yelled Joseph where are you  it is time to go. I was fighting to get to the top I was nearly there. I grabbed onto the side of the ball pit and pulled myself up. I saw my Mom I was so gleeful that I made it to the top and now I know not to go in the ball pit ever again.

THE END