This week we have been writing about a Chimp, how went to space here is the link if you want to watch the video It’s not a Planet, it’s our home.
We had to do a plan before we write the story here is where I am up to.
Hi my name is jack it is 1961 and I am going to space to discover new plants. I was first very exited, but when I hopped into the spaceship my heart started to pound. I have a mate called Mat he was my trainer. He trained me if there was emergency. “Are you ready Jack” (came from the speaker.) OI AA (that means yes in Chimp.)
Great post Inaka. I like how you have linked the video and put part of your story in it as well. I would like to see some similes and metaphors in your writing to describe the setting.
ReplyDeleteK I will try to Mr Scott and thank you
DeleteAwesome Job Inaka I like your Space Chimp Plan. Your story is going to turn out awesome with all of your great ideas! Maybe next time you should check your spelling before you post your work. Other then that Awesome Job!
ReplyDeleteThanks Sharlisa and KK
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