The worst day of my life.

W.A.L.T recall  events through the eyes of an animal.

Success Criteria

I know I will be successful when my recount has a

• Title
• Orientation:  When? Who? Where? Why?
• Sequence of events:  What happened? Describe using the senses (hear, taste, see, smell and feel).
• Personal Comment:  How did the events make you feel?

(First Draft)

The worst day of my life.

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One nice morning i was working  along the river bank  ayy,  can smell the fresh morning air. Suddenly the herd stopped then I could see that there was some lions in the distance. They were getting ready to pounce on us. There was nothing to do but to run. Bam I fell into the river bank. I started to sink then I got pulled out of the water but there was something sharp pulling my tail. Then I saw my dad, mum and my friends they were running to me and the lions. I could taste blood in my mouth. I can hear the ground shaking.

Finally i got back to my herd, my dad got really angry and started to ram the pack of lonis. I was so scared i just had  hid at the back of  the herd, but at least I made it i fell releft.

Inaka's Learning Goals.

Battle at Kruger National park sequence.

                          W.A.L.T recall events events in order.

	The herd of buffalo are walking along the river bank.
	A pride of of lions are resting in the sun
	The lions are getting ready to pounce on the buffalos.
	The lions are chasing the  buffalos.
	The buffalos are ranying away from the lions.
	The lions playing tug of war with a calf and crocodile.
	The herd of buffalos are surrounded the calf up on to the bank.
	The buffalos  are charging into the lions.
	The calf  Buffalo is rescued by the herd of buffalo.